Kyungbokgung Bulgogi in Incheon/인천, 송도맛집

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It is very famous restaurant in song-do, Incheon

A few days ago, I heard about it from my coworkers.

Most of residents in Incheon know this restaurant. So I wanted to check it by myself kkk

The big parking lot here is very convenient for those who have cars

Basically, the setting and service looks good.

But the spilled some gravy sauce under our table, I wouldn’t give 100 points for the service. Kk

Bullgogi is being boiled now.

It is heavenly when dipped into sauce.

So, I figured out why this place is so popular around here

They serve the dishes right away.

And waiters were always smiling, making us feel comfortable to order more dishes.

There is no superfluous dishes.

Most of all, I love the side plate.

The kimchi soup~!!!! Everybody loved it.  You could eat up a bowl of rice just with this soup.

What I ordered is bibim naengmyeon(cold buckwheat noodles mixed with red pepper sauce)

The sauce is so great, it’s different from regular naengmyeon in other restaurants.

I like all of the menu here. I thought that a popular store has something different to offer.

첨삭받은거와 같이 올려봅니다^^ 넘 꼼꼼하게 해주셔서 감사합니다.

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correction

It is very famous restaurant in song-do, Incheon.

A few days ago, I heard about it from my coworkers.

Most of the residents in Incheon know about this restaurant. So I wanted to check it out by myself kkk

(We are taking into consideration that the narrator has arrived at the restaurant)

The big parking lot here is very convenient for those who drive their have cars.

Basically, the setting and service were looks/seems good. (The narrator, is speaking as he experiences things)

But they spilled some gravy sauce under our table, so it I wouldn’t give 100 score points for the service. Kk

Bullgogi is being boiled now.

It seems heavenly to put some sauce on in (in the mix, not just ON top of the dish) it.

So, (connecting words can do wonders in a composition) I figured out why this place is so popular around here.

It’s because they served the dishes right away when we ordered (superfluous, no need to say that)

and waiters were always smiling, making us feel easy comfortable to order more dishes.

There is no superfluousness.(The meaning of this statement is unclear)

Most of all, I loved this these/the side plates/dishes.

This kimchi soup~!!!! The/their kimchi soup! (“This Kimchi soup” denotes that the people at his table or at the restaurant loved that particular soup he ordered, as opposed to “The/Their Kimchi soup” which means the dish served in the restaurant) Everybody loved it. Just with this soup, you may eat up a bowl of rice. You could eat up a bowl of rice just with this soup.( suggested sentence arrangement)

What I ordered is bibimnaengmyeon(cold buckwheat noodles mixed with red pepper sauce)

The sauce is so great, it’s different from the regular naengmyeon in other restaurants.

I like all of the menu here. I thought that a popular store has something difference...different to offer